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lumbulë

It’s all slow-motion
As I jump through the window.
As I flee “the shit”
And plummet to the unknown.
Falling with the shards and rain,
I manage the drop.
And once on the street below
The black night is mine.

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clluelo
clluelo
1 year ago

Hopefully there will be a collection of the poetry on the Freq available soon. I keep saying the same comment . I love this one , action poetry a new genre !

Miche
Miche
1 year ago
Reply to  clluelo

Yes!! Action poetry, that totally fits! <3

LPD256
1 year ago

TO-Working at night in a shadow lifestyle has its advantages when one needs an escape. As for me I preferred working in the dark and matching wits and skill with the potential runner. Way more fun than hunting some defenseless deer or pheasant in the daylight. Those hunts were long ago but very memorable.

Miche
Miche
1 year ago
Reply to  LPD256

LPD – speaking of people who should be writing down their stories to share with people lacking depth in the civics and civility side of education……….

LPD256
1 year ago
Reply to  Miche

Thanks Miche. Someday I’ll share a few classics. The funny ones are fun. There are some horror stories as well. I might put together a vignette of short ones.

Miche
Miche
1 year ago
Reply to  LPD256

I look forward to it! Did you ever finish that essay on the use of deadly force?

LPD256
1 year ago
Reply to  Miche

Yes-I’ll see if I can send it to you.

rynobucket
rynobucket
1 year ago

57577575 nice.

Miche
Miche
1 year ago
Reply to  rynobucket

Go check out the pattern for Skyfall…. (I had help with that one.) Genius!! 🙂

Miche
Miche
1 year ago

TO, I don’t think this is ever going to get old. I hope you have an endless supply of words at your disposal, because it’s fun looking forward to whatever you come up with next.

Miche
Miche
1 year ago
Reply to  Miche

PS – Tolkien…. <3

Miche
Miche
1 year ago
Reply to  Theo Dyssean

You strike me as a risk-taking kind of guy….. I have a tough time seeing you quail at the judicious application of ostentatiously arcane words. 😉

GsGirl
GsGirl
1 year ago

Sir…it’s stellar! Looking forward to more!

Mic-Mac
Mic-Mac
1 year ago

An Ody action figure needed. Love it.

Mic-Mac
Mic-Mac
1 year ago
Reply to  Theo Dyssean

Haha.

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